This is very good but something about your lines bother me. I almost feel sometimes they're too wobbly or rounded maybe? I also think you may be adding too many creases in clothing and it doesn't look quite natural. You're pretty close to the pokemon style, so i'll give you credit there. I just feel it looks a little sloppy, this style. This isn't hate, just a little criticism.
This looks just amazing, as usual! This pose you picked out looks great~and her expression is so cuute *u* I can't get over how good you are at this pokemon style Wahh I love it ♥ Anyway, this is perfect~Thank you so much for letting me commission you again!